Are You Listening???!!!!!

Yes. You probably are, and that’s probably a large part of the problem.

It’s late and I’m sitting here writing a song; not for me, but close enough.

It will be for me soon enough, I have no doubt.

For now I will post a few of the fragments that came by sitting, plugging in a couple of mics and a guitar, and praying for a friend:

Can you hear me?

You said you’d fill my cup,
but I’m so thristy
One drop would be enough

. . .Am I breaking up . . .

What do you want from me?
What do you need me to say?
I’ve been on my knees for what seems
Like forty, or maybe forty-one days. . .

(The bridge is the only thing solidified:)

Don’t dare to tell me how Daniel waited
or all the shit you put Job through;
This is the here and now, I’m not a Hebrew
and oh my God, I swear, this is between me and You!

Can you hear me?

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More from Mark Jarman’s Unholy Sonnets

Someone is always praying as the plane
Breaks up, and smoke and cold and darkness blow
Into the cabin. Praying as it happens,
Praying before it happens that it won’t.
Someone was praying that it never happen
Before the first window on Kristallnacht
Broke like a wine glass wrapped in bridal linen.
Before it was imagined, someone was praying
That it be unimaginable. And then,
The bolts flew off and people fell like bombs
Out of their names, out of the living sky.
Surely, someone was praying. And the prayer
Struck the blank face of the earth, the ocean’s face,
The rockhard, rippled face of facelessness.

Comments

8 Responses to “Are You Listening???!!!!!”

  1. eric on February 25th, 2008 1:59 pm

    everything is lyrics to a song.

  2. MEH on February 25th, 2008 6:43 pm

    “Don’t dare to tell me how Jonah hated
    or all the things with a fleece
    Your boy Gideon could do;

    that sort of black and white,
    just seems to be faded
    to shades of grey,
    when I’m the one talking to you. . . “

  3. Jolene stoel on February 29th, 2008 4:00 am

    How about words about how everything has its season and the timing just isn’t right yet? That one is my personal favorite.

    Sorry friend.

    Sending love.

  4. MEH on February 29th, 2008 11:28 pm

    I’ll field that one for the friend:

    “Yeah.” Translation: “Fuck that shit.”

    I’m sure the friend will let me know if I got that one wrong.

  5. eric on March 5th, 2008 11:18 am

    lol. quite.

  6. MEH on March 5th, 2008 6:09 pm

    Can I come home now?

  7. Jolene on March 6th, 2008 10:41 am

    I meant that your song should include that one.

    Dude, you need to make your house where your “home” is … or else make your home where your house is. Sucks to be so fragmented.

  8. MEH on March 7th, 2008 9:44 pm

    My “home” has not changed in 28 years.

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