Comments on: Relationships: A Puzzle http://greyparty.net/2008/07/26/relationships-a-puzzle/ I never wrote you great poems, I just meant them ~ Gavin Castleton Wed, 08 Feb 2012 08:56:59 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.0.5 by: v http://greyparty.net/2008/07/26/relationships-a-puzzle/#comment-434 Tue, 16 Sep 2008 04:54:36 +0000 http://greyparty.net/2008/07/26/relationships-a-puzzle/#comment-434 Thanks! That's a nice thing to say. Thanks! That’s a nice thing to say.

]]> by: MEH http://greyparty.net/2008/07/26/relationships-a-puzzle/#comment-386 Fri, 01 Aug 2008 06:47:07 +0000 http://greyparty.net/2008/07/26/relationships-a-puzzle/#comment-386 You sound like my MFA profs. You sound like my MFA profs.

]]> by: v http://greyparty.net/2008/07/26/relationships-a-puzzle/#comment-385 Fri, 01 Aug 2008 03:41:11 +0000 http://greyparty.net/2008/07/26/relationships-a-puzzle/#comment-385 yea- good metaphor. nice. two suggestions. you could probably drop the 'stranded in solitude' phrase, it's a bit over-kill for the mood of the rest of the piece. And, in the next paragraph- nit picky metaphor overlap- puzzle pieces don't normally 'swirl'. yea- good metaphor. nice.

two suggestions. you could probably drop the ’stranded in solitude’ phrase, it’s a bit over-kill for the mood of the rest of the piece. And, in the next paragraph- nit picky metaphor overlap- puzzle pieces don’t normally ’swirl’.

]]> by: MEH http://greyparty.net/2008/07/26/relationships-a-puzzle/#comment-383 Mon, 28 Jul 2008 06:19:21 +0000 http://greyparty.net/2008/07/26/relationships-a-puzzle/#comment-383 No analogy is perfect, but this one will do for now. No analogy is perfect, but this one will do for now.

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